Thanks everyone for the feedback and suggestions!

So far I’ve been able to address Nev’s first idea (thanks for doing the mockup, I used it as reference) and RL’s comment about the walker shot. For the latter, I think cropping to hide the right leg is better than swapping shots, as the editing is so precise in that scene spatially and flows so nicely that I don’t want to mess it up.

The other two comments I will look at later in the week and repost the entire scene with all four changes together! I think this will be my last round of tweaks, as at some point I have to call it and get V3 out the door. Thanks again to everyone for your ideas and mock-ups to help make this version the best it can be!