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Post #1327382

Author
4throck
Parent topic
Enter the Dragon (a WIP)
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Date created
2-Mar-2020, 9:29 AM

I played a bit with this movie and it can be improved by some scene reordering and trimming of Roper and Williams.
Basically:

  • Open with Roper and Williams flashbacks
  • Tighten pacing on Lee’s fight, abbot scene, recruitment.
  • Tighten boat sequence to get them all to the island quick.
  • Add deleted scenes to show Lee as a master (show his book)
  • On the island, tighten dinner scene around Lee
  • Only one night passes (condense all action to one night)
  • All tournament sequences happen the following morning/day, trim Roper and Williams fights.

Just putting this here because it works reasonably well and fits the existing footage.