The new targeting shot looks really good! I feel like you could use it as is, but I could see how a little additional touching up could make it feel just perfect. Excellent work Poppa!
Removing the ring from the broom boy scene works really well! I was literally thinking about this for the epilogue idea I had, and how one could create an additional shot of his face could be used to replace that shot. So weird to see that you’ve done that exact thing!