Thanks to everyone who has given me feedback so far in private topics! I think when the new season of TCW ends, I’ll have a final version done. It’s now less about experimenting and doubling down on and polishing the decisions I’ve made that have worked for people.
So far the biggest things to fix:
- “Roger roger” elevator bit. Make the quality drop less noticeable or just remove altogether. There’s enough banter and wit in the rest of the first act now that I don’t need it anymore?
- Mixing audio better overall, but particularly in re-scored/radically edited scenes. Raising levels on Anakin/Padme conversation about lightsaber and timing the audio clips with the shots better.
- Intro Kashyyk scene needs wipe and maybe some extending.
- Reinstate some of Anakin’s attitude. Either in front of the council or only with Obi-Wan, but not in both.
- Use some different shots of Anakin in Anakin confronting Palpatine scene.
- Reinstate some of Palpatine’s orders to Vader, keep shot of him putting on hood.
- Clean up vfx in final Mustafar sequence (Obi-Wan listening to Anakin, Anakin igniting first)
- Re-add Qui Gonn voice.
I’m still open to feedback for the current version!