Do you think the Luke and his Binoculars scene can be excised and not included would it still make sense?
the basics of the audio are done for Tosche station and Biggs farewell Part 1 and 2. The Wind sound effects I am using will probably change but I can do that later as I am not happy with it currently.
I have only just exported them with the audio matching the video just now taken quite a while.
I have prepared sound effects for Luke’s Binoculars zoom and stop.
I have observed the following for this scenes will need sound for Grit footsteps and jump Landings. Sound for the pebble Luke throws and pat’s / slaps on the back sound effects.
Music for the Bar scene at Tosche station is a certainty.
In terms of structure if Lukes Binoculars can be done and made to work as I said as short and sweet as possible this would be the general structure.
A Long Time ago in a Galaxy far far away…
POV Lukes Binoculars >>> Luke close up of him looking through binoculars >>>> POV Lukes Binoculars 2 >>>> Luke Runs off screen >>>> Treadwell droid moves head>>>> Luke Boards Landspeeder >>>> Treadwell Droid 2 >>>>Luke Drives off
swap logo for poster logo.
Note: this scene could be done as a tease not showing what Luke is looking at through the Binoculars.
Edit:
I have edited this in a more traditional manner and it will have dialogue in fact a bit more than you are used to hearing.
next deleted scene
Escape pod flies towards Tattooine >>>> Landscape shot of Desert >>>> Luke Jumps out Landspeeder >>>> Luke runs up steps Composite escape pod in the sky flaming streak >>>> Bar scene >>> Outside the Bar with Binoculars end of scene >>>>> Shot of Star Destroyer static >>>> Pricess Leia walking through corridor.
Note Seeing the Binoculars POV shot here would provide the Bridge to Pricess Leia on the Tantive and remove the need for an establishing shot of the Star Destroyer.
Next scene
R2-D2 and C3P0 part ways >>>> Biggs and Luke Tosche station part 1 >>>> C3P0 waves at sandcrawler >>>> Shot of Sandcrawler driving over the Hill >>>> Shot of Tosche station (from mos eisley intro) >>>> Luke and Biggs farewell Part 2 >>>> R2-D2 in the Canyon.
I must admit I am dreading trying to get the Binoculars scene to Work… If it makes sense with out it, it’s gone!
Edit:
Binoculars scene working almost…