Nah, I wouldn’t remove it, I don’t think. Rose saw Finn transform into the hero she mistook him for at the start, get her medallion back, and demonstrate a willingness to give his all for the cause as her sister did.
I wouldn’t remove TROS’s kiss, neither. It’s like the only sexually charged anything the whole movie!
I see your point. Granted, I think the two kisses are wildly different in that only one of them was accompanied with sexual tension that built over multiple movies.
I’ll have to watch your edit again - maybe the removal of the “saving what we love” line paints the kiss in more of a “holy shit I almost died and I’m super fired up right now” kind of kiss.