I’m just going to adjust the levels a bit on the “Don’t ask me to do that” and “I’m so sorry” (or just remove it, I’ll see how people receive it), and add that dramatic cue Chips suggested for Obi’s appearance. This should more or less be the last thing I figure out before I have a workprint ready.
The “I’m so sorry” is an excellent addition, especially since it makes it look like Obi-Wan still sees potential to redeem Anakin (which is important for Saga continuity, especially ROTJ).
I’m really looking forward to this one. You’re doing good work in making ROTS fit with TCW, especially with Anakin’s arc.