Yes I have…
- Fourth Draft (January 1976)
- Revised Fourth Draft (Shooting Script) (March 1976)
You will have to navigate to the scene only found in the 4th draft revised. Peter Mayhew shooting script he showed on twitter contains the Montrose character scene meaning that the Greedo scene simply was not there originally and a re-write and removed Montrose that became Greedo for the purposes I already stated. It is about the only re-write apart from killing Ben Kenobi on Death Star and let’s get out of here before this thing goes supernova. Literally not much changes.
That is it apart from it being a rough cut a few alternate angles some different dialogue the Luke Binoculars Toshi station Biggs scenes a few tid bits here and there some incidental scenes.
This Dialogue is quite interesting
LUKE
See Threepio ... do you copy?
THREEPIO
I read you, sir.
LUKE
Are you safe?
THREEPIO
For the moment. We're in the main hangar,
across from the ship.
LUKE
We're right above you. Stand by.
Insert! (Han is watching the dozen or so troops moving in and out of the
starship).
HAN
Getting back to the ship's going to
be like flying through the Five Fire
Rings of Fornax.
LEIA
You came in that thing? You are braver
than I thought!