Hal 9000 said:
removed Threepio’s line, “It would take a miracle to save us now.”
Maybe changing it to “it would take a miracle to save the REPUBLIC now.” would emphasis the stakes more.
Post #1323981
- Author
- idir_hh
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1323981/action/topic#1323981
- Date created
- 7-Feb-2020, 11:46 AM