Art is subjective. You might think some of this is stupid, I happen to think it’s a masterpiece.
The grass is always greener, but “masterpiece” seems a tad strong for a partial screenplay of a film that was never made. There is some good stuff in there, though. I rather liked Trevorrow’s version of Ben’s redemption. I think J.J.s version was good too. Both seem a bit abrupt though.