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Post #1322856

Author
RogueLeader
Parent topic
Fixing The Last Jedi's 'COMEDY OF ERRORS' - FINISHED! Clip AVAILABLE!
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Date created
30-Jan-2020, 5:33 PM

I would say either option 1 or 2. I also wonder if it would be clearer if you replaced the last word in each with ‘reward’.

Two of them, and a droid. The resistance has no business here officer, unless they have a price on their head.

It’s a resistance shuttle alright, probably here to stir up some trouble, officer. Could be worth a good bounty!