Maybe I’ve said this before, but this current paragraph 2 in the OP (which everyone is working off of)

Rey, sole heir to the Jedi, continues her training under General Leia Organa, hoping to commune with Jedi of the past.

doesn’t really accomplish much, because we don’t learn anything from this that we don’t find out within 30 seconds of seeing Rey. Anyone looking to rewrite the crawl should take a crack at that, I think. Personally I would recommend either trying to give some insight as to why she’s doing this, or use the space to talk about something else entirely.