*Remove the line about the Holdo maneuver. If it is something legitimate then someone who lives in that universe shouldn’t have the same misconception as we might.

That certainly needs to be removed. Just take it all out! Especially since it was done at the end of the movie over Endor. Another contradiction. Simply removing that exchange is an easy fix.

*see if it could somehow be communicated that the Sith fleet needs the First Order to man the ships

I would absolutely love something like that. Had a friend over the other night and were talking about Star Wars stuff. (BTW, loved the movie and trilogy as a whole now with it all complete, good for him.) And I was discussing ways to improve on the movie. He did agree that something like that would be great to really connect the two sides. It is a too unbelievable that Palp found 100,000++++ followers to man those ships. Even if they were “Skeleton crews,” the sheer number was crazy. So having some kind of line to connect the dots for the two “sides” like that, First Order’s manpower and Final Order’s ships, that would be neat. It has to be done some how during the table discussion with the Generals, but need to have the movie and any deleted scenes to see if some dialogue or extended time can be used, even if it can be a “random” general in the background saying that, so anyone can be a voice actor for it.