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Post #1322312

Author
Chase Adams
Parent topic
Fixing The Last Jedi's 'COMEDY OF ERRORS' - FINISHED! Clip AVAILABLE!
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Date created
28-Jan-2020, 3:43 AM

MasterSolo said:

Thank you. I’m excited. This is going to be fun. I think the first line is too wordy. I like RL’s idea that he wants the First Order bounty, and they are waiting in jail til they get picked up. Doesn’t the guard mention something like “You’re under arrest for illegal parking”? So, his line will need to be changed too.

Hmmm…
How about:

Option 1
Two of them, and a droid. The resistance has no business here officer, unless they’re worth a good price.

Option 2
It’s a resistance shuttle alright, probably here to stir up some trouble officer, could come with a good bounty.

Option 3
Our casino guests aren’t gonna want these resistance folks here, unless they’re looking to get paid.

Vote now!