Are you going to remove the “Oh no” in the opening Resistance evacuation scene? That line adds nothing and is an example of on-the-nose dialogue.
Post #1322175
- Author
- FreezingTNT2
- Parent topic
- Fixing The Last Jedi's 'COMEDY OF ERRORS' - FINISHED! Clip AVAILABLE!
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1322175/action/topic#1322175
- Date created
- 27-Jan-2020, 12:24 PM