Improvements all around, I’d say!

The first flashback is better integrated now. I would only suggest working on the music transition, it still feels a bit rough.

In the second flashback, I wonder if the nightmare even needs to be shown or if the flashback alone would be enough to sell the idea of his guilt at not freeing his mother.

Nice vignettes! Again the music transition from Naboo to the vignettes could be improved, but I like the use of the imagery from the end of AOTC, it really helps bridge the gap.

For the Anakin/Obi-wan pre-fight, I wonder if cutting it down more would be better, if you are intent on placing the focus firmly on Anakin’s desire to save Padme. Maybe have something like:
‘Don’t lecture me, Obi-wan. I see through the lies of the Jedi. I do not fear the Dark Side as you do.’
(closeup on Obi-wan checking Padme)
(Anakin softly, to himself, starting with the Padme shot and ending with Anakin back to camera) ‘I will save Padme’s life’
Then it might be possible to combine the part of the shot where Obi-wan gets up with Anakin looking grim and not saying anything for a silent Obi-wan reaction shot to preserve continuity (Anakin originally said ‘my new empire’ at this point).
(Anakin back to camera) ‘Don’t make me destroy you.’
‘I will do what I must.’