And the cultist sounds really solid. I think the biggest to me, that I think you should consider, is to be picky about which lines from outside sources you use. Like I mentioned, I think the video game lines for Obi could pass, especially with some adjustments, but I don’t think any of the outside source lines for Anakin in that scene really fit.
Doing a great job man!
I agree with this. Anakin’s new lines really stuck out for me. Obiwan’s, not as much. You might be able to make those work, but if not, I won’t really miss them. Other than that, I love what you’ve done with the scene!