I’ll try to respond to everyone, especially you Rogue, but for now that should give people a clearer idea of what I’m going for.
No rush, NFB! I think your reasoning for avoiding the “dark side corruption angle”, as well as keeping the Padmé scenes in the proper order, make total sense. Sorry I’m not providing much help!
And the cultist sounds really solid. I think the biggest to me, that I think you should consider, is to be picky about which lines from outside sources you use. Like I mentioned, I think the video game lines for Obi could pass, especially with some adjustments, but I don’t think any of the outside source lines for Anakin in that scene really fit.
Doing a great job man!