The broadcast itself is a bit too much and out of place to use here I think. Interesting idea to add “At last” though! It actually is already in there, but very muffled. The first piece of the radio that comes through (what makes Kylo look up) is the “At last” from the beginning of the Fortnite broadcast. I liked having a nod to the broadcast that was still vague, but I could make it a bit clearer if we think that’s important to hear.
Here’s a new pass of 4E. For this version, I tweaked the light rays and added some camera shake so the shots of the radio didn’t feel so static.
Palpatine Contact - Option 4E
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