I had a thought.
I’m sure there are a good few of us who don’t REALLY need something like this,
But would the below be of any use to help potential editors start structuring an imaginary cut?
I’ve kept it short because I don’t want to go to the effort of a ‘shot to shot’ commentary for the whole movie if I’m going to break any rules??
I’ll post it up for now, and if I have to take it down, I’m here standing by to delete it if need be:
so 1) If I’m breaking rules, I’ll delete it
- If the idea isn’t really helpful without visual reference, I’ll get rid just the same and let the experts do their thing once TROS gets it’s home release.
Anyhow:-
TROS
Scene 1:
Crawl….
*Camera pans down 3 x Tie Fighters fly toward a FO Star Destroyer and Mustafar.
*Cut to – Ground level Kylo cutting down natives (only storm troopers – no knights of Wren)
Fight ends – (no dialogue)
*Hard cut to shot of stone case containing wayfinder.
Kylo takes it and inspects.
*Scene fades to space, Kylo’s TIE approaching Red Nebula.
3rd person sequence of Kylo piloting through the Nebula
Close up of Kylo piloting > Close Up of Wayfinder plugged into TIE systems
*External shot of space – Nebula in distance. Kylo’s TIE seemingly drops out of hyperspace. Camera pans to follow TIE as it enters Exogol atmosphere.
*Cut to – Establishing shot of Geometric structure – Kylo’s TIE approaches in shot.
*Cut to – Ground level pan up, Kylo now on foot, walks toward amera and ignites crossguard saber.
Reverse shot – Kylo enters structure
*Cut to – Middle distance, Kylo stand upon circular stone lift and it decends, revealing huge Sith statues.
Mid shot of Kylo reacting to:-
(FIRST DIALOGUE!! 4mins in ) = Palpatine’s exposition.