Since I ve never been a fan of those fanedits that make invasive changes to the official Canon, Id like to see an edit that would included those cosmetic changes:
-firstable, remove the damn kiss. Its So bad, So awkward, So out of place.
-remove the fleet’s capacity of destroying planets. Seriously, its gettin ridiculous.
-I d put the scene with Leias body dissapearing After Rey strikes down Kylo. Or, maybe After Hans vision.
-Maybe Id remove the twins’ghosts from the ending. It just looks weird.
-and, if possible, insert as much of deleted material as possible.

Im also not a big fan of the Title. Maybe someone could change it into “The Last Command”, as a nod to the TT. Especially that for a lot of fans, this books was like a “True” ep IX.