Not bad. Could use a little editing, but it’s not bad at all.
Post #1320244
- Author
- DuracellEnergizer
- Parent topic
- Remnant of Glory:A Space Western similar to Star Wars that i'm writing
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1320244/action/topic#1320244
- Date created
- 16-Jan-2020, 3:29 PM