I think the second one is a bit more natural. It would be great if there was a “so” line from Snoke that was a little bit more “intense”, it would fit with Hux’s twitch. But that is just a minor thing and I do think the second one feels more natural than the first one.
Post #1319947
- Author
- jarbear
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1319947/action/topic#1319947
- Date created
- 15-Jan-2020, 12:21 PM