Sorry for so much posting!
I updated 4D V3, retiming and recropping the end shot of Kylo’s eyes, hoping it no longer feels like a duplicate and more of just cutting back to the same camera angle.
So the three options I’m considering are:
Palpatine Contact Option 4E
PW: fanedit
Description: Twitch shot restored to theatrical spot. Ends on long dolly shot.
Palpatine Contact Option 4D (V2)
PW: fanedit
Description: Twitch on “Find Me”, ends on radio shot with signal totally gone.
Palpatine Contact Option 4D (V3)
PW: fanedit
Description: Twitch on “Find Me”, ends on Kylo eyes closeup, retimed and cropped.