For the cave scene what do you think of starting the silhouettes with the hooded figure than the parents and finally to Rey? I think it makes more sense lineage wise.

As for Palpatine’s contact, I think you can do without the laugh at the end personally.
In option C I like how you cut straight to Rey after Palpatine’s contact with echoes of his voice still there, it makes for good foreshadowing. You can still play with the dialogue a little though, something like “You are fulfilling your destiny…find me.” or “your journey nears it’s end…come to me” would make the scene linger a little and give it a sense of inevitability.

Really great stuff, I’m impressed with how fast you’re pumping these out!