Simple, remove all of the “woops” and have him go with the other space fighters his decision (cut all dialog about the autopilot) 😃
On the podrace do the same, cut the silly exclamations and it works much better.
Post #1317756
- Author
- 4throck
- Parent topic
- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1317756/action/topic#1317756
- Date created
- 5-Jan-2020, 9:44 PM