smpearce1981 and jarbear, I like both of your ideas for the radio scene. Definitely good to consider for the next pass. I am thinking of trying it as more of a whisper, but perhaps using the radio as something for Kylo Ren to interact with. In other words, leave it ambiguous as to whether it’s the radio, as smpearce1981 suggested.

Definitely agree on smoothing out the last part of the robe. I think it lingers too long and shortening it will sell it better.

smpearce1981, I did watch parts of TiMartyn’s edit and what I saw was very good. I think it’s the best version of completely cutting the Hux call I’ve seen. I still like having the phone call opening, as it shows Poe using his wits and cunning to get the better of Hux.