Where is this dialog from? If it’s from the previous films I would recommend using the dialog from FortNit by the Emperor. It’s spoken by Ian McDermit and it’s referring to the message of Revenge sent out to the whole Galaxy before TROS.
Building off DZ-330’s edit and Ash’s note on balance, here’s a next pass.
https://vimeo.com/382154087
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