The planet that you pan down to after the crawl is D’Qar when it should be Achto.
@Anjohan’s edit for The Force Awakens should end with the Falcon leaving D’Qar (similar to @NeverarGreat’s edit), and then have the edit for The Last Jedi begin with the Falcon in hyperspace (credit to @DigMod).
I personally don’t think this works. TFA is not impactful enough for me without revealing Luke at the end. We’ve been talking and looking and hunting for him for about 90 minutes and then we gonna leave the film traveling into blue light? No, not for me.
I love DigiMod’s alteration - and though i haven’t watched NeverVar’s (other than clips and ideas), it just shows how different we all are. For me such an ending would not fulfill me after watching this film (and my edit of TFA is simply to make it bearable, because i found it so dull - now i actually like it).