I really enjoyed the ROS, but surely a few nips and tucks would help it.
I like what I’m seeing here so far, especially the idea of tweaking the crawl to let the film introduce Palpatine.
Definitely get rid of “light speed skipping” if possible, that took me right out of the movie (or at least get rid of the Tie-fighters keeping up).
The only other thing I can think to suggest is regarding that cone-head droid. There’s a thread in the film about ‘not under-estimating droids’. It seemed like they were building up to have that cone-head do something awesome, but there was never a pay-off. If there is a way to snip that out cleanly, I think it would improve things.