I like your edit ideas! A lot of them are similar to my initial thoughts.
Regarding how to tie the civilian fleet to Luke’s sacrifice, maybe someone over the comms could say, “For Skywalker!” I believe someone may have made this suggestion earlier.
I like your edit ideas! A lot of them are similar to my initial thoughts.
Regarding how to tie the civilian fleet to Luke’s sacrifice, maybe someone over the comms could say, “For Skywalker!” I believe someone may have made this suggestion earlier.