While I might disagree with some minor changes you plan to make, I consider erasing Rey’s parentage and foreshadowing Palpatine’s return absolutely necessary. I like your approach and I hope you find these changes doable in a convincing way.
Post #1315314
- Author
 - Dr. Krogshöj
 - Parent topic
 - The Sequel Trilogy: Trilogized (a Work In Progress)
 - Link to post in topic
 - https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1315314/action/topic#1315314
 - Date created
 - 29-Dec-2019, 4:39 AM