My take at first thought after seeing it. I would have Rey die after saving everyone, and so does Kylo when being blasted off the edge. Maybe with sadder music when he dies? Then i would just cut all the Rey scenes after and end the movie during the celebration. Fin is walking around looking at everyone and the mood is perfect for if Rey had died and Finn is feeling it in that moment, but also taking in the fact that they won. Bitter sweet.

Theres a few other cuts i would make like some dialogue and jokes. Or the terrible rip off of End Game “I am all of the Sith” “And I, am all of the Jedi”. That just hasssss to go. Such a rip off of Tony saying “And I, am Iron Man.”

All and all though, despite some of the flaws that can be cut, the Trilogy wasn’t too bad. I look forward to cutting it down a little and making it more dark like the Prequels ending. Albeit with the victory of defeating the Sith and the Empire. Almost a Pyrrhic Victory.