I wonder if you could remove Ochi killing Rey’s parents? If you go with the Rey Nobody angle I feel like it would be better to not give her the “parents tragically murdered” backstory.

Also, I was wondering if there was a way the McGuffin quest could be tightened at all. I think it would be good to remove the dagger line up with the outline of the Death Star wreckage. It just seems like the dagger looks ancient, but then it has the coordinates of something that crashed into the sea 30 years ago.