I only noticed one thing that was not the same- with the opening “Star Wars” logo, you can see the stars through the logo. In the official crawls, the interior was solid black. That’s OK, though; either I can paint the stars out frame by frame, or perhaps you could redo that little section of the crawl at your convenience. Either way

Thank you so much for this! Could you PM me either your full name or your first name with mother’s maiden name, public name…just something that I can credit you with other than Rebel11_38.
To everyone else: the film is now officially and irreversibly titled SHROUD OF THE DARK SIDE.
EDIT: Another minor problem I noticed- a lot more stars are visible in your background than there are in the actual movie. This makes the stars dim when I fade, some stars disappear, etc. Again, I can fix that very easily, but just wanted to let you know. Except for that, everything looks perfect. I've looked at both MagnoliaFan's and ADigitalMan's crawls for Episode II, and this one surpasses them both in terms of font accuracy and formatting. You have made the best fan-made crawl that currently exists for Episode II. GREAT JOB!