I think that works really well.

Although I do think that the previous version you put together felt more dreamlike, particularly with the voices of Han and Kylo Ren echoing in the background.

I noticed that you also switched to doing simple dissolves in/out on those clips. I’m wondering (and this may be a terrible idea, but here it is): what if instead of fading to black between the clips, it just cut back to Rey sleeping in the chair?

Scene starts, Rey establishing shot
Quick cut to dream
Quick cut back to Rey
Quick cut back to dream
…

Eventually moving faster and not returning to Rey until she wakes up.

I’m just playing with ideas here. I think we may have more to work with after seeing The Rise of Skywalker.

P.S. When are you seeing the movie, by the way?