Originally posted by: Trooperman
"Ten years after Palpatine’s rise to power in the Galactic Senate, unrest once again pervades the galaxy.”
This is what I’m using and it’s correct, is it not? The apostrophe is OK because there is one in the original ’77 crawl. I realize that the other variants are incorrect grammatically- that’s why Palpatine’s rise has been changed from past tense to a past event, for consistency. I think the crawl is all set grammatically, now.
"Ten years after Palpatine’s rise to power in the Galactic Senate, unrest once again pervades the galaxy.”
This is what I’m using and it’s correct, is it not? The apostrophe is OK because there is one in the original ’77 crawl. I realize that the other variants are incorrect grammatically- that’s why Palpatine’s rise has been changed from past tense to a past event, for consistency. I think the crawl is all set grammatically, now.
That is grammatically perfect and sounds good.