I’ve made substantial revisions to my last entry.
- Artoo has been added to the story.
- Instead of snapping Zul’s neck, Ventress stuns her with a blaster.
- Siri’s been removed, her role given to Obi-Wan. This is a painful decision for me, as I quite enjoyed the relationship she and Obi-Wan had in my previous rewrite. Unfortunately, this rewrite is following a different trajectory, and I realized a romantic partner for Obi-Wan doesn’t align with it, so she’s gone.