First post here.
Not sure if it’s been addressed, but one thing that’s bothered me is Leia’s dialogue during the Death Star Chasm swing scene.
She says “They’re coming through!” yet neither the visuals nor the performance of the actors align with this.
I would suggest that that line be moved to when the stormtroopers first start coming through the door, and then her line “Here they come!” be moved to the second shot of the door raising, right before she gives Luke the lucky kiss.
A minor edit, but it makes more sense with the flow of the scene.

Link to the scene I’m referring to:
https://youtu.be/ECN-Q7tWg8M?t=69