@Hal 9000 Here’s a suggestion: can you remove the “oh no” at the beginning of the film? It disrupts the flow of the scene (I mean, if you remove the line, then the scene flows so much better) and basically tells us how we should react, when in reality we already know that it’s an “oh no.”
Post #1306930
- Author
- FreezingTNT2
- Parent topic
- The Last Jedi: Legendary (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1306930/action/topic#1306930
- Date created
- 22-Nov-2019, 11:20 AM