Here’s a suggestion: when you inserted a reaction shot of Kylo after the cannon fires, there’s some “light” on his face as the door blows up. Can you do the same thing with your edit of the flying Leia scene where Poe and the others are reacting to the ship being hit?
Here’s a pass at that idea, just adding a little reflection to Poe, Finn, and Billie Lourd.
https://vimeo.com/373681562
pw: fanedit
It’s a small change, but I think it helps the continuity. Thanks for the idea, FreezingTNT2!