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Post #1305381

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NeverarGreat
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
14-Nov-2019, 1:11 PM

RogueLeader said:

Well, at the very least you could keep the majority of those subtitles and just change “Ren” with “Hux”. You would still get the idea across that he was a janitor that was promoted to field duty recently. And Hux slapping Finn in TLJ night then seem more personal. It also makes more sense that Hux would have the authority to promote him more so than Kylo. This could at least be your option for now until you think of something else that might fit better.

For sure.

I think this new music works well too! Might want to get some more input besides me. I liked how the little thump of the strings lines up with the shooting star!

Is it similar to another Star Wars movie scene or another movie entirely?

It just made me realize that there are some similarities in this transition/scene, even though the feeling is a bit different and far more effective than some Frankensteined fan project (Spoilers for a decades old kids movie):

https://youtu.be/yhaoJxQpRg0?t=61

SomethingStarWarsRelated said:

Ok you probably don’t want to hear this but I just realized that Rey and R2 are both on screen right. One should really be on the left while the other should be on the right. I don’t suppose you have a way to extend the background to right in Rey’s shot do you? 😜

Do you mean in the fade from Rey sleeping to R2, or when Rey is looking at R2? In either case I could probably flip the shots horizontally without it looking too weird.