In the roughs the extra exposition seems unnecessary and forced but the ideas are good, I’d try to find a way to establish it within the crawl.
Post #1304396
- Author
- act on instinct
- Parent topic
- The Prequel Radical Redux Ideas Thread
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1304396/action/topic#1304396
- Date created
- 11-Nov-2019, 8:28 PM