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Post #1303804

Author
DominicCobb
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Star Wars Episode III: Revenge of the Sith, Another Happy Sanding.
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Date created
7-Nov-2019, 3:30 PM

Octorox said:

Don’t want to get anyone’s hopes up just yet but I’ve started tinkering with this again. Trying to find a narratively satisfying place to put the 3rd seeds of the rebellion scene and I think I may have finally cracked it. Borrowed a shot from Siliconmaster482’s edit which I believe was pulled from Attack of the Clones and flipped/color corrected.

Here is the clip: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1ar3OOaZZGQ9oaf5ZGoqojil3Dj2Ugwy4

EDIT: Watching through it a few times, I may ultimately decide to wipe to the next scene after “Senator Amidala is hiding something, I can see it in her eyes”. Thoughts on that vs. how the clip currently plays?

Nice, this is similar to how I did it in my edit (only I put the dream after the deleted scene). One minor suggestion would be to add a beat after Anakin asks if Obi-wan has been there before we cut to him saying his next line, only because the pacing feels a bit awkward on that edit.