Here is what Hal came up with after we played around.
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Finally got a little time to catch up!
jarbear, what you and Hal have done here I think is perfect! I think it addresses the feedback we’ve gotten about the Jedi boy at the end being too out of context. It also gives you more context about Canto Bight which resonates thematically with Finn’s story.
The only thing I wonder about is where you cut Rose’s line about fathiers “I’ve never seen a real one.” It’s not an important line, but I feel like it finishes the moment of her excitement about seeing them, which is why they ran out to the balcony in the first place. I don’t think the line creates any issues? So I may consider putting it back.
Right now, this and the Phasma body add to the shuttle scene are the changes I intend to make for V2.