Hey Gabe!

Thanks for posting! I appreciate the edit, and it’s always fun to see other ideas.

What you posted is definitely different from what I have. You made it so that immediately after Poe points out the window we cut straight to Leia on the gurney. The thing is, it feels too abrupt to me, and doesn’t pace out right with the music or position of the characters. The bridge just exploded, and we immediately see and hear Leia getting medical treatment. More importantly, because it happens so fast, we don’t have time for it to sink in that anything has happened, and we lose Kylo-Ren’s reaction to what he thinks is his mother’s death, which I think is a very important moment.