I absolutely love this fan edit and everything it does, but I was messing around with something and made a very rough edit that changes when events take place during the Leia scene, I just changed some of the scenes around from your edit but I think this seems like it could be cool, It makes it where you see Leia immediately get pulled inside after the ship is fired on and you see Poe’s reaction.

This is a very rough edit but I think this could be a way to fix that scene more: https://vimeo.com/369222411
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