Looking good! Your music transitions are seriously seamless, especially how you go back out of the TLJ piece back into the TFA piece, very nice. I think you could pull off something similar with the shot of Leia reacting to Han’s death earlier in the film if you found two pieces that worked well together.

Did you add a guassian blur effect to Luke? I liked it more after rewatching the clip a little bit it initially stuck out to me. It felt a little noticeable, but subsequently it felt as if Luke was almost appearing on the cliff’s edge, which is kinda cool, and I’m guessing you were sort of going for that. What you could make him come into focus slower, I don’t know if he is already coming into focus as soon as the shot starts or only the last second or two. Ehh, anyway it’s just my first impression. Nitpicky really.

Also, I noticed that the fade-to-white sort of fades back in to Luke barely for just like a frame or two before it completes fades back onto the Resistance.

Anyway, I’m glad you made this change!