I’m currently working on my edit for TLJ, and here’s the new crawl so far:

The galaxy is in chaos!
Having decimated the REPUBLIC
capital, Supreme Leader Snoke
now deploys his merciless
legions to seize military
control of the galaxy.

Meanwhile, Rey, having
travelled across the stars
has finally located the Jedi
Master Luke Skywalker, certain
that he will return and restore
a spark of hope to the fight.

General Leia Organa’s
band of RESISTANCE fighters
has been exposed. As the First
Order speeds toward the base,
little hope remains…

What do you think? 😄