I love the idea behind this. Rey tapping into the dark side. I honestly wonder if this was something they played with in the editing of the theatrical. Because they had the footage right in front of them to do this. Very interesting…
I’ll go ahead and throw some of my technical thoughts out there:
- The audio of the clashing of lightsabers (followed by “You need a teacher” line) could use a bigger punch (imo)
- The “I can show you the ways of the force” line sounds a bit funny…does this have to do with trying to remove the original music underneath?
- Any way to bump up the audio of Reys “The force?” line? It’s a bit quiet. It’s certainly not terrible the way it is.
- I had to listen multiple times to realize Kylos voice was mixed in “…the father you never had…he would’ve disappointed you”
- Personally, I don’t care for Finn’s “Reeeyyyy!!!” but I’ll admit that has more to do with his delivery
- I actually thought I heard a Tusken Raider scream…it wasn’t until read RogueLeaders comment that I realized it was Chewy roaring.
These observations got me to thinking: what was the logic behind these particular audio clips you chose? I’m not saying they were wrong…because I’ll admit sometimes this sort of stuff can go over my head…but depending on your goal, there could potentially be better- or more suitable clips. Or I could be entirely wrong! 😛
By-the-way, this is great stuff! Hopefully my comments will only help make it better…or maybe just solidify your original choices! 😄